The season of monsoon
Is a farmer’s fortune
The season of monsoon
Is the guest of June.
Is the monsoon -
A curse or a boon?
Latter in the noon
You want it to come soon.
Sometimes it’s a curse
When we get it surplus
Watch out for the falls
Or we all will be fools.
It is a boon to the world
Without it we all will be dead
Sometimes it is bad
But we are not that sad.
The season of monsoon
Is nothing but a boon,
A farmer’s fortune,
And the guest of June.
Friday, November 16, 2007
Monsoon
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2 comments:
It seems this is ur first attempt at poetry if im not mistaken.
Frankly, u need to refine the language part a bit. Its not necessary that all lines in your poem should rhyme. It seems that youve tried hard to make alll lines rhyme , but in the process youve compromised on essence and meaning.
Plz take it constructively. Im sure you can do better.
Keep writing.Dont lose hope
Not the best.
But you should continue.
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